funnaibunnai's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SuperSpellHeroes]

Amazing piece! There is almost nothing I can critique about it! The flames look a little off and so does the hood. For the flames, try searching up some tutorials. The only thing I can recommend for the hood is to add wrinkles.
When I usually write reviews, I try to find some flaws, and I actually had to look at your piece for a few minutes before I noticed something!
Beautiful piece!

lylianvv responds:

thank you for your advice, I am still very new in drawing. this is the first time I try coloring my drawing. I saw your drawing and I really like it. I like the color palette end style. I try to be better myself. forgive my bad english

[B-SuperSpellHeroes]

This is absolutely amazing! Whether it was intentional or not, I really enjoy the texture on the piece. I'm also 11 (just turned on the 30th of August) and I doubt I would ever be able to pull something like that off. The only thing I would change about the artwork would be the character's slant (many beginners do it, nothing to worry about - you'll grow out of it). As a fellow 11 year old, would you mind checking out my submission (my second post) and critiquing it? Anyways, good luck!

[SuperSpellHeroes Skin design Contest / HexaDona]

I love the color choice and the actual way this is drawn! The only thing I would change would be to lower the purple dot count.

[My Entry for the SuperSpellHeroes Competition: Thoben the Monk]

I love this piece! The positioning of the character, the wand, the magic effects behind him, everything! There are only 2 things I'd change if I were drawing this:
1. Re-position the legs so that there isn't a symmetry line between them (since he's floating and with the way the legs already are it seems as though he's standing on something).
2. Either make a mask on the line art to make the inking around the hair lighter or SLIGHTLY change the way the individual strands of hair are drawn since the realistic hair looks slightly out of place with the cartoon body.
I love this drawing!

BalletOnButter responds:

OMG thank you so much for that, you just made my day!! I 100% agree with everything you said but since this was my first time doing lineart I'm still quite proud of myself.

[Jane]

I really like your art style, the color selection, and that you kept some of Jane's original design features, but I feel as if the costume is way too similar to one of Jane's in-game skins. If you were to change up the hair color next time and replace the flowers with something that wasn't involved with plants, I believe you would have yourself a very promising design! That's only my opinion though. Remember to keep drawing!

[Super spell heroes Thoben]

I really enjoy your design and color selection (it doesn't look like you over-used any colors), but I would recommend to spread out the green more throughout the piece and (this is just my opinion) have a little more red (maybe on the wand) to balance it out. I would also recommend to ink the body (you might've done so, but the picture is a little blurry). I like your shading, very nice! Keep drawing!