funnaibunnai's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SuperSpellHeroes]

Amazing piece! There is almost nothing I can critique about it! The flames look a little off and so does the hood. For the flames, try searching up some tutorials. The only thing I can recommend for the hood is to add wrinkles.
When I usually write reviews, I try to find some flaws, and I actually had to look at your piece for a few minutes before I noticed something!
Beautiful piece!

lylianvv responds:

thank you for your advice, I am still very new in drawing. this is the first time I try coloring my drawing. I saw your drawing and I really like it. I like the color palette end style. I try to be better myself. forgive my bad english

[My Entry for the SuperSpellHeroes Competition: Thoben the Monk]

I love this piece! The positioning of the character, the wand, the magic effects behind him, everything! There are only 2 things I'd change if I were drawing this:
1. Re-position the legs so that there isn't a symmetry line between them (since he's floating and with the way the legs already are it seems as though he's standing on something).
2. Either make a mask on the line art to make the inking around the hair lighter or SLIGHTLY change the way the individual strands of hair are drawn since the realistic hair looks slightly out of place with the cartoon body.
I love this drawing!

BalletOnButter responds:

OMG thank you so much for that, you just made my day!! I 100% agree with everything you said but since this was my first time doing lineart I'm still quite proud of myself.